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My Observations

Sheri Fresonke Harper Avatar Sheri Fresonke Harper - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled My Observations which was written by poet Sheri Fresonke Harper. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My Observations

All the eagles soar increasingly circular overhead my umbrella.
All the elephants thrash inconsolably tasting of trees umber.
All the earwigs buzz inexpressively surrounding oracles with uncertainty.
All the evil makes illness triumphant over the unclean.
All these expressions say ignore details obey the unusual.
Animals like everyone have inelegant needs overcome by uptrends
all may embrace but illusions may overturn their usefulness
and we extravagantly take impressionable judgments opting for unawareness.

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
    I'm having trouble connecting the title with the theme of this piece. That being said, theres alot to take in with this piece. What seems like obsevations in turn become quite prophetic insights. Should have been titled My Observations. :) But what do I know. What do you think I know is the question. :) Peace. :)

    Harper Avatar Sheri Fresonke Harper
    Date: 5/1/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good suggestion Robert. I tried the vowel con attractions contest and focused on the method more than the final message, I think I'll make this fix.
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Good morning, this created crazy imagery as I read on, enjoyed this one Sheri..take care ..always~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your very unique and creative work this eve..If for a contest, it should be in the winners' list in my book..Thanks or stopping by..Sara