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PARADISE TOO SHORT

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PARADISE TOO SHORT

   at first glance my heart leapt within me
  i felt a sensation i never once fell victim
you stole my heart and i had to get it back

  i unleashed upon you the gift of my mouthpiece
 even Shakespeare would have given me my due
     with the eyes of a lamb you invited me
to share the beauty spot of you gorgeous heart

       you came knocking at my door step
        at the eleventh hour my ark angel  
        made my life a blossom of Lillis
 once in a lifetime i experienced heaven on earth

      exchanging rings inspirited our love
    beautiful like diamonds Rihanna did say
  our love proved spherical for it had no end
      till that day you left without a word

  under the wreck of a monstrous machine
    you left me for the land of the leals
 for even the gods adored you more than i
    and the paradise curtens fell 
    a paradise too short  indeed


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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Kizito -CONGRATULATIONS!!! with your 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your fine win. A well deserve win. Connie

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Hi, kizito, this is sadness painted in beautiful poetry. still sad,though. This is is wonderful. I hope someone somewhere will bring a longer paradise to your life soon.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 6:14:00 PM
    It is saddening to find joy only to have it taken away so abruptly. I bid you peace and comfort... Congrats on your win.... Jake

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    Date: 7/5/2013 4:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanx but it was'nt about me.just put myself in another person's shoes
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:26:00 PM
    KIZITO, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT

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    Date: 7/5/2013 4:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANX Skat