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A Crescendo, Then A Starburst

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A Crescendo, Then A Starburst



This dreamlike creature beside me in bed With long golden tresses and lips of red Eyes like blue sapphires and skin like satin All packaged up in a womanly wrapping She raises her body as we both breathe as one She caresses my face, the passion's begun There's no turning back on this magical ride We ascend ever skyward, we're burning inside We explode with emotion enveloped in love As we ride on a zephyr to the heaven's above A crescendo, then a starburst, we rest on a cloud Proclaiming devotion as we sing it out loud © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 4:57:00 PM

    Aahhhhhhhhhhh..........:-)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 4/27/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aahhhhhhhhhhh.......... thank you dear Donna! xoxoxox
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 2:53:00 PM

    This has to be one of the most poetic titles I've ever seen by you. The whole piece was quite whimsical and made me wish to sleep outside in a hammock... and just let my imagination run wild, looking up at the stars. Wonderful, Jack! Not what I typically expect from, but a great surprise nonetheless.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 4/27/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A SURPRISE??? Surprised me too! Don't what happened! LOL Now back to the sillies...
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 1:16:00 PM

    sooooooooooo nice Jack xx

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 4/27/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sooooooooooooo much! Huggeroonies xoxoxox
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:39:00 PM

    such a sentimental, winsome piece that allows me to see you in a different light... off to the skyline you go... wonderfully worded!..:) huggs!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 4/27/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A different light... oh yeah! Don't know what happened... maybe coz went off my medication! LOL Hugs, Silly Jack xoxox
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Wow! Cathie must really be impressed with this one! I am... And it's not even funny... You know, maybe my dragon might act better with a girl friend to impress... uuummmm... He might not poo on my roses if he has a girl friend he wants to give them tooo...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 4/26/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't know what happened here! No silliness, just passion and starbursts and stuff! HUH! LOL Hugs, Jack xoxoxox