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Double-edged

Double-edged

Maybe,     I       should 
dig       faster       now, 
but        my        hands 
are     already   numb, 
and       this     gasping 
lamp       shows        to 
be           troublesome. 
The              undecided 
sweat   on    my    face 
comes    to    a      halt, 
as   a  light,    daunting 
and                 blatantly 
obvious           unfasten 
my             camouflage 
amongst  the shadows. 
The       paleness       of 
the   moon   tricks me, 
and     quenches    the 
flicker  of  a  faithful’s 
vigilance.To   witness 
the treachery  of  the 
deepening      shade 
like a deadly snare 
for  a   fallen 
prey. 





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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 2:25:00 AM

    Well done Greg ! - Like it a lot. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:53:00 PM

    this is really powerful .. well done you