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  1. Date: 6/23/2013 11:28:00 PM
    love the metaphors, and " crush her into dust,",,,, on to # 11 ;}

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:38:00 AM
    Wow!...number three better watch herself...this is all so mysterious, Laura...

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Good metaphysics Laura - I admire your Art & message - elicits the concept that our thoughts/beliefs can give or take 'life' away from realities - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Laura, I read all of these related works tonight. Black journals with a red streak are perhaps the things we must rely on to be read and discovered. And I guess there is a lot we take for granted in terms of what will happen to us. It tells me to be very careful in the way I deal with all the people I come into contact with. We never know if we are failing to discover something critical in another's life. For some reason, your poetry is so enjoyable and deep.