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In the meadow - re- posted

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In the meadow - re- posted

The darkness falls i am here alone
I  wanted the peace and quiet
To lie here in the bluebells and think
A heavenly retreat to quell my mindful riot

I am lying here , when i felt a gentle touch
Like fairy whispers on my skin
My eyes wouldnt open my senses were such
I arched  my back I felt his body within

What seemed like hours we made love
Satiated  I fell asleep, was this a dream
When i awoke i was still alone, lips bruised, 
Body aching covered in loves cream

I looked about nothing to suggest
I wasnt the only person here
Then I  saw it amongst the bluebells
A single red rose to say I was here 

In the meadow


17 April  2013

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Excellent!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Judy...Seren
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:53:00 PM
    What a sensual piece you have created here Seren...just so lovely...luv,Deb

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/24/2013 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Deb fr stopping and commenting...Seren
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:15:00 PM
    I loved this incredible write the first time I saw it, however I believe I love this poem a little more now the second time around! I knew what to expect and that made the experience that much better! I do read poems multiple times when I read them, in case I missed something! I'm glad to have a chance to read this one again! What a tremendous piece my friend, awesome poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/24/2013 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell had a re- think...Seren