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STARRY CHARM

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STARRY CHARM




Umbrella of stars hangs lucent in the sky Flickering by as nightbirds trill the wing One moment when hill tops wait on standby To relish the charm of dusk, awakening. And this blissful scenery becomes mine Where memorials of walk take me awhile, Into a parade of light with blinks divine As evening’s sari wears a lovely smile. UFO Contest of Robert Heemstra

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 4:05:00 PM
    soupmail...

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 6:00:00 PM
    A wonderful image you have conveyed in your poem. Congratulations Nette on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 8:12:00 AM
    I agree with Andrea, so glad I read this one this morning. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:30:00 PM
    well, gosh, this is one of the prettiest ones on the list!! Congrats, Nette. Glad I am finally seeing this.

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Well done! Peaceful and tranquil setting for sometimes confounding displays of technology..... Congrats... Jake

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:19:00 AM
    many congrats nette xx

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Beautiful. Congrats. Rivck.

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:02:00 PM
    nette, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 5:38:00 PM
    This one could also win in the stars contest. Congratulations Nette. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 5:03:00 PM
    I love the line speaking of memorials of walk take me awhile....what a beautiful line that is.....lovely poem, Nette!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Lovely piece from a great poet...Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest...Nice going...

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 3:50:00 PM
    There's nothing like an umbrella of stars. Thank you.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Yes, there is something so ethereal about the sari, so ... captivating. I'm zonked! Hubby has been working his casual job as well as his full time, so he is just as exhausted. I've been CONSUMED by writing a crown of sonnets, and have spent about 17 hours on it, so far, lol! What was I thinking!!!! I am working on the closing sonnet and struggling. When this is done, I may try another, but not for a bit. 98 lines, flow? AWK! LOL, happy weekend to you, hon...allergies okay? HUGS!!! xox Cyndi

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Ah, the magnificence of nighttime splendor. Wonderfully said here!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:40:00 AM
    This is ever so lovely a write Nette. Good luck to you with this winner. Yes and I am glad too, to have your sweet words on my pages again.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 3:03:00 AM
    - A beautiful picture of what nature has to offer - Good luck in the contest Nette! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Perfect in its simplicity and the only reason I'm not wearing a lovely smile is because I'm a guy---doesn't mean Im not smiling though!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Fantastic, I am soooo glad you came back, your poetry is so illustrious my friend! This one is striking and puts me in awe, awe of its fine beauty! I really enjoyed the line, "Into a parade of light with blinks divine" I can visualize this expressively! Thank you for sharing this gem with us, especially for me to read! What an exquisite piece, it shines as the stars, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Yes!Yes!Yes!! She`s back in business:-) It`s great and captivating indeed to read this gem,Becca is right:we`re in love with your poetry my dear friend;-) Hugs to ya`Nette,and take care..Arild

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