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Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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David William Breidenthal
Have felt this pain
That you have been hiding from me...
Stinging me with abhorrence...like acid rain
That pours fourth envy and strife in the wilderness
Have been inflicting pain upon myself - I just had to address
Have bottled-up my emotions forever it seems
Bringing me down...dragging me down
In a dark, murky trench...the sun beams
WHY do the sun not shine on me?
Can't bear my affliction
This solitude will
always hover around me...
The reason is still unknown
My mind is blown...
I'm surprised how much I've grown
Wish and pray for a brilliant future
For you...Remember, friend of mine -
To shine with confidence like the sun
REMEMBER, friend of mine:
You are never alone no matter what
Have experienced and felt your suffering...
You and I
Have to work together
And help each other along the way -
Are you willing to accept my offering?