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I Just Found Out

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I Just Found Out

I just found out… That my friend has been hiding a secret He says that she has given him some news He didn’t want me to know about it As she wanted to give surprising clues In her eyes she found me charming and cute When she told me, it was over the top I always thought her gorgeous and a beaut I don’t want our first date to be a flop I cared for her immensely, a pure love I just hoped she loved me just the same way It turned out she aligned with me above She enlightened me surely on this day I just found out… That she wants to go out with me today She let me know it after work this day There’s no way that anyone could delay If this happened to them, surely no way In my heart I hold her real close to me Joy to live my life with her lovingly Being as one will last now instantly And will go on till all infinity I just found out… She loves me, and one day will be my wife I love her and I will give her my life Simply a delightful piece of great charm Never a moment of fear, nor alarm My friend kept his secret, she came to me Joy of happiness is brought in what’s free I showed her true love, which she did return Forever we will be married as one
Russell Sivey Was going to enter into Black Eyed Susan's contest but found out that it was supposed to be 1-16 lines, I will have to reduce this poem to fit the restriction.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 5:41:00 AM
    VERY SWEET

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Very tender and heartfelt. :) Nothing like true love.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
    capitally great and good to know... Lol.. That you just found out ... It has exceeded the limit. Best wishes there~A.O

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:41:00 PM
    Aw, this was so sweet, Russ! The awkwardness and excitement of new love felt really genuine to me... and you just found out! Best of luck on the contest!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Oh Whoa Russell my friend we now know more what is behind that smile, loved loved the poem, so deep so sincere so YOU. Keep her next to you always. Love Terry xoxo A Fave. a 7>>>>>>