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The 'End' in Friend

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The 'End' in Friend

I, treasure you.

But, would you stay if I ever said goodbye?

Would inferno’s pilot light succumb to your tears
Knowing tomorrow’s uncertainty
Is our greatest fear?

Would my ill-timed laughter
Make you cringe in disgust
Changing your perception against my heart?

Would you
Hold me
As we wade through baptismal waters of sin
Without bruises from cedar scented crosses?

Can I count the ways
You would be my exhale
When insanity chokes the living within

The living, within!

Within cracked glasshouses
Covered by umbrella’s demise

Would you come to despise
My true colors
Shaded in blues & violets?

Would I need to come to your rescue
After you’ve kicked me when I’m down?

I WOULD!
I WOULD CRAWL WITHOUT YAWN’S FATIGUE!

I would sacrifice my Agnostic flesh
To become a new believer
Born-again
Within YOU!

I would remove my 3rd eye to present what I see in you!
I would become your contact lens that you’ll never have to remove!

I would taste degradation
Simmering in a gentle broil around my arms
And season you with my smiles
Just to make it through choke-holds of a Winter solstice!

I would become your handsome error
Hoping we can write each others wrongs!

I, treasure you.

But,
Would you be there upon last dance’s syllabic end?

My friend, 
I’ll wait by this stainless steel chair.

Embracing the “never-say-never”…

…because, with you, my humanity is willing to believe in forever.

© - 4/22/2013
Submitted for the “What a Friend really is” Contest, sponsored by Becca Lucas; Won 5th place. 

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 1:29:00 AM

    In this piece I SEE YOU... You are an extravagant soul my friend with a gift to penetrate the calloused of hearts. Applause!

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:07:00 AM

    Is there another word that equal 'brilliant'!! You really are something, Drake... lots of your work is excellent stuff. reading your work adds to my sense of lucidity, I often think hmm.. now, that's a perspective:) Hugs!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/30/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, this is a comment I can get down with. =) You made me smile this morning. Thank you so much, Bindu. *HUGS*
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Rereading some....Don't mind me.... :-D Beyond powerful.......

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/21/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No worries! =D Thank you, Eileen.
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:20:00 PM

    deep passion is a rare gift, though, painful...I would give much for a friend like you....(like the line about giving up the third eye---and most rare of all eyes, and thus the greatest gift) rich and passionate words!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/2/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Victoria. Yes, you're quite right about that. I can be that friend, if you want! =D
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Brilliant right from the title!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/17/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Richard!!!!! =D
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 7:09:00 PM

    RThis deservs a 7. There is nothing like having a true friend that will never let you down. It has been said that it is better to have a good friend than a thousand dollars in your pocket. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/10/2013 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is tremendous of you! Thank you so much, Lucilla.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 1:52:00 PM

    Rereading..You seem to be willing to give so much to a friend.Awhile ago.i used to think the same way..but i wonder how many friends are really worth all that?..Nice to read your post again Drake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 6/8/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In the end, you realize, not many. But, sometimes, the true colors of somebody aren't always so clear in that moment. No matter what, at least you know it's true when you make this kind of declaration. Good to see you back here, Charmaine. :)
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 5:02:00 AM

    true friends last a life time awesome Linda

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/25/2013 5:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Got that right! :) Thank you, Linda!
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:37:00 AM

    This was so good! It's always amazing to have a friend that you know you would do anything for. The saddest thing is when you know they wouldn't do the same for you. This was a great poem! Best wishes in the contest! This time...I bow to THEE!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/20/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're awesome, Caleah. You couldn't be more right about that. Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 9:23:00 AM

    It is true, we are so particular about sameness, created rituals, occasions! The true friend is the "thick and thin" kind, who can muster up, anytime, or any place! Please read my "ALWAYS FRIEND" on my posting page. Paula L.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/16/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Paula! You are quite right. Yes, I'll have a look. Thanks for stopping by!
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:51:00 AM

    It's all very chaotic while at the same time heartfelt and relevant. To open your mind to others beliefs (to even give up your own) for the sake of friendship... WOW! Spoken from the heart... great job!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/16/2013 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I believe the importance of what you said is that one SHOULDN'T have to change to be in a friendship. But, they're willing to for the sake of keeping that friendship. Thanks so very much! :)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:47:00 AM

    arr most beautiful description of what a true friend is. love it. P.S check inbox :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/14/2013 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Sasha! :) I have to agree with you. Thank you so much for that. I'll check my Soup Mail.
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:39:00 PM

    I can't believe I missed this one. This is fantastic, it leaves me with a lack of articulation to aptly describe the viseral reaction it creates within me. moving it to my favorites.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/8/2013 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    How awesome to hear!!!! That's really cool of you to do. Thank you so much! :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:36:00 AM

    A beautiful piece of writing.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/8/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi there, Katherine. Thank you so much for that and for stopping by! :)
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:36:00 AM

    Beautiful

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:44:00 PM

    Congratulations my friend xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/7/2013 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Rose!!!!! :)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading your very expressive and emotive work.I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for your visit..Sara

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/7/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi! :) Thank you very much! Always a pleasure when you stop by!
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:30:00 PM

    Drake, CONGRATULATIONS... friendship can be a very sweet feeling.. love your meaning.... :-) *LINDA

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/1/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola, Linda! Thanks so much. Yes, yes it can be...
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Big Congrats on your win ~A.O

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/1/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much! :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:02:00 PM

    Very different and out of the ordinary. Congratulations. Love, joyce

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/29/2013 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Joyce! :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:32:00 PM

    I really admire the "no holds barred" poet. You really give it your all and deliver it well

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/29/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're very kind to say that. "No holds barred" is quite accurate. :) Many, many thanks to you!
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:50:00 PM

    Great write but very long but it has merit in it's length. thank you for sharing

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/27/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you kindly for stopping by. I do appreciate it! :)
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 12:10:00 PM

    You have a way of making your words express depths I never knew existed. This is stunning my friend. Hugs and luv,, Gail

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/25/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) That means so much. Thank you dearly, Gail.
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Oh my God, Drake, What a piece!!! I found myself just gaping at a masterpiece. Great job there.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/24/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Ginger! :) That's so awesome of you to say! Thank you so much for stopping by here!!!
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:49:00 AM

    A heartfelt write penned strongly here. Well done! This should do well in the contest.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/24/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope it does. But, either way, I'm very glad you stopped by here. :) Thank you, Yesha!
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:36:00 PM

    You just gave you whole heart into this, drake... what a tender and gripping artpiece!..:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/23/2013 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think the theme deemed this type of expression very necessary. :) Thank you, as always, Nette! :)
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Powerful write Drake....you definitely got what it takes to be a true friend as the evidence in your loyal words. Excellent! Hugs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/23/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That means a lot. I believe I am quite awesome to be a friend. Though, I will only treat one as I'm treated in return. I won't chase. :) Thank you so much, Cecilia!
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:14:00 AM

    ahhh poetry, fav images [Would inferno’s pilot light succumb][ Without bruises from cedar scented crosses][Within cracked glasshouses/Covered by umbrella’s demise] I could go on but I will reply as a woman and as a sheildmate, a warrior and you will see..perhaps..you have not given what is desired? **I'm am only speaking to the content man to woman. Light & Love [a fav/7] lines

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/23/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debbie!!! Well, essentially the message here is that it should work both ways. A meeting, halfway. :) And, I'll be honest, I've not heard of "slipstream" or "bizzaro" before. Thank you so much for being here! :)
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/23/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS speaking of forms, perhaps this is either slipstream or bizzarro? they both seem subcatgories of free verse? yes? no?
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:48:00 AM

    To.exhale your breath from a friend To be born within a friend a friend who.has kicked you.down To be baptised on sin's holy water to become a new.believer to be whom your friend wan t you to.be to.give her a contact lense so.she.could see clear how special this persona is to you That is friendship in a unique way And a friend like this deserves d waiting You ve taken a deeper step to friendship the kind of friendship which makes one feel secure and safe.Hope yr friend get 2 this Powerful &deep

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/23/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I couldn't agree more. Thank you for taking the time, as always, Charmaine. :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:56:00 PM

    So deep and powerful...you have to read it again to catch all the nuances, Drake! :) My favorite lines? I would sacrifice my Agnostic flesh To become a new believer Born-again Within YOU! WOW! Your friend is the fortunate one! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/22/2013 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Eileen!!! That was the point of it. I'm glad you caught that. ;) I'm grateful you stopped by. Thank you!
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