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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Giving up is the sour side of life....hopelessness is the toxic juice in the pickle use your own metaphors........there is also tastier morsels to try. Deeply introspective poem, Lisa! ps......many thanks for my placement in your Moon challenge...enjoyed it very much. :) Thank you.......Have some pastrami with your pickle, and enjoy some indulgence!!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Lisa, enjoyed.... deep...pd

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:49:00 PM
    it's the thing we all dread. bordom.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Sweet Angel The struggle is easier if you live in the moment . Pay bills ,work etc, but keep your thoughts on caring and loving everyone you meet. It is a trip to see people react. In this moment I will be happy and I will love you . Iam doing something to make this world better. Try it it's fun!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:39:00 PM
    I can really feel the weariness in this and sadness too. stellar ending!