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haiku 25

waves crash ashore
seaweed floats to and fro...
salt filled air




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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 10:48:00 PM

    love the haiku and the ocean ;}

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:13:00 PM

    Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I believe that you are back..This winter was mild here but lots of cloudy days which can be dreary..Thanks for stopping by to comment..My husband is facing spinal surgery again..He has found out he is diabetic and has pernicious anemia..I am about the same..Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:18:00 AM

    thanks for all your comments and I sure wish you had some new poems up for me to see, dearie. It's after 1 a.m here and I need to get to bed soon, but still have more comments to make. I sure hope you are having a better week than that one time you were so busy . Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Simple words but nice imagery

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:54:00 PM

    I like the assonance of the O sounds in lines one and two of this haiku, Phyllis. Nice to see you posting up a new poem!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:20:00 AM

    yes ..... it smells like ocean ..... lovely Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:56:00 AM

    Perfect picture painted of my favorite place to be, Phyllis - Tim

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:11:00 PM

    just love this one, Phyl

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:43:00 PM

    this is so picturesque...love the ocean! luv,Deb

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:58:00 PM

    Love it, anything that consists of the ocean I'm loving it. Best wishes for you in the contest and wishing you a great weekend as well. Love, Gail