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The Kingfisher's Stare

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Below is the poem entitled The Kingfisher's Stare which was written by poet Shane Cogan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Kingfisher's Stare

                                                The Kingfishers Stare

 

                                                   shy blue halcyon
                                       caught your stare under moonbeam
                                                   ripple over splash







                                                                      © Shane Cogan 2013
          

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:41:00 PM

    the imagery is amazing. ~LINDA

    Cogan Avatar Shane Cogan Date: 5/9/2013 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Linda. This is also one my favourite ones.
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:11:00 PM

    Splendid, a wonderful write I could picture the scene vividly, wonderful.

    Cogan Avatar Shane Cogan Date: 5/2/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Seosamh for your kind words :)
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 4:58:00 AM

    Hi Shane, I really like your haiku. The only thing that stands out to me is the title, I think that if you are going to title your haiku at all, perhaps this one would work better called "The Kingfisher's Stare" and not "A." hugs, Catie :)

    Cogan Avatar Shane Cogan Date: 4/20/2013 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Catie. Good suggestion and greatly appreciated. Your right, it works better. Big hug. Shane