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The Vital Holy Day

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Below is the poem entitled The Vital Holy Day which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Vital Holy Day

Getting ready for
Passover to shed us might
For joyous future

The significance 
Of God’s holiday is way
More vital than us 

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Slavery has so many different ways of attaching its chains to us. Passover is a fantastic mental health concept. Let's see--slave at work, slave to hate, slave to food, slave to sex, slave to boredom, slave to money, slave to possessions, slave to money and so many more. Moderation is a good principle and not taking advantage of people is a good concept too.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Lovely, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 4/19/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awww thankx so much! your comments make me beam!! xD