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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 10:24:00 AM
    a prayer in her pocket is a great line;how many of us can relate to that feeling? Love it . Rock on !

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:42:00 PM
    I love it Catie especially how you wraped it up in rhyme. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:55:00 AM
    The intensity on this is astounding. Yes, walk on! No looking back.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Faving this. Real. PERMANENT ... how odd to use this word, but its what comes to mind. Permanent, unwavering, solid... Loved the careful repetition. I am not certain if the last line is needed... I think I liked "again" as the last word. But other than that? Oh, not one word would I alter. Such art, hon. The waterless well, so good. My favourite line is fine lines of parallel. Only seekers and seers walk that line, as you do. :) Hugs.