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TYPEWRITER

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TYPEWRITER



Papers and ribbon bang on the floor The onion scent of white turning into coal, Smudges of lines trail into her veins Punching QWERTY keys on a chrome machine Under a lamp light soft as the pink moon; The screech of blotted pages dangle through rollers Waiting for her eyes to speak through hands. There lay the mumbled words curling up On a teak chair like nocturnal lyrics hauling raw drafts slowly glowing Into fresh contemplation, and the melt Of coffee stains drips on edges as she Folds another ream of leaves along bars, Riddled with ticktocks of a sleepless night. Then, fresh linings of thoughts bark at the winds While her lips drench inks of cappuccino Moistened among burning stars. * Inspiration from Mary Oliver's lines:" “You can have the other words; chance, luck, coincidence, serendipity. I’ll take grace. I don’t know what it is exactly, but I’ll take it." Craig Cornish: Typewriter Contest 19 April 2013

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:48:00 PM
    That's excellent Nette...Congratulations

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Congratulations.... enjoyed stopping by tonight ~LINDA

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Lots of nice imagery here, Nettie. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:37:00 AM
    As always Nette, a magic pen--thank you--please read my blog.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Great write Nette ! Amazing how in the USA, The first six letters on the keyboard on the typewriter is, Q W E R T Y, and in continental Europe, the first six letters are, A Z E R T Y. I loved the way you incorporated Qwerty in this awesome write of yours ! I enjoyed reading you today dear poet ! Have a blessed day my Nette ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Excellent way you have chosen to describe. Best of luck. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Very wondeful I can visualise this scene...

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Hi Nette Nice to see you again in Soup. Such an outstanding entry! This is a great title as we know typewriters have been taken over by computers! Love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:46:00 PM
    Wonderful story of typewriter here Nette!Love this!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:45:00 PM
    You still have the magic in the keys, Nette.......(this time, the computer keys) !! What a wonderful entry!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:52:00 PM
    You`re on top of the game again With this great captured moment dear Nette! Splendid poem:-) Hugs and Love..Arild

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Howdy, Nette...you doll, you. Your way of placing words never ceases to amaze me.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:40:00 AM
    I am in awe of this awesome write my friend! You constantly amaze me with your writing, you can create an ambiance from out of nowhere! I am most impressed with this delightful poem, another grand accomplishment from your dedicated quill! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:14:00 AM
    An outstanding piece for the contest my dear friend Nette! I'm sure it will win! I'm planning to go to Mla. 'cuz i want to get something from the university where I took some MA units (unfinished MA 'cuz I left the country;))). I hope, I'll have enough time. As of now, I'm still in BKK & have 1 more wk.work. We're going to ask permission to the principal on Mon. 'coz we need to report already on the 7th of May. Oh my! How I wish I've enough time 4 my family. Fr. Clark to North takes 10hrs. I'll inform u ok. Thanks! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:56:00 AM
    A fantastic moment captured so gracefully. Now I want a cappuccino! I don't even drink coffee! Well done! :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Good to have you back on board with your fine writing. Good luck to you in the contest, Nette. :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Im glad you are back with your magnificent poetry Nette