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  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Gripping & catchy. Embracing love, the world over! I highly enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:00:00 AM
    This feels like a very deep and special poem for your true love! It's beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:59:00 AM
    so you have heard African starlings, Huh? That's cool. Do you live there? Let me see your poem now!

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:15:00 AM
    clever poem, yes one can read a lot into the spaces here, although the poetry, the words stands on its own, and is excellent

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:38:00 PM
    Thanks for this poem. The use of figurative language is beautifully used throughout this piece. "ruffled feathers threw stone and bone white noise rose up from my pages"

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:49:00 PM
    I love this poem. The brevity is superb -- you offer a good amount of metaphors with so few words. My Love, there is a lot more going on within the spaces found between the words.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Nice poem and flow.