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  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:19:00 PM
    Mmmmmm sexual tension...gets us every time LOL. Just stopping say. G'Day. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Thanks for the comment you left on you know who's blog.. he went to far.... I know many Texans on the soup... and I'm the #1 Texan every one knows of... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:52:00 AM
    Intense! That's the one word I think of when I read this - intense! Really wishing you well on your book ventures! I've heard a saying once, as advice for aspiring authors. It went "A page a day means a book a year"... that is about the average length of a book anyhow...

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Wow, powerful...

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Gripping! Awesome work. REALLY love your stuff Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Wow!!!! Where is the rest of this novel???..... Gotta go see where this came from !!! whew

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:38:00 PM
    You just left us HERE, Um, really can't say, lol, hanging, now, can I? Hee hee. My thoughts? The last line. Ha! All kidding aside, book or short story? Will have to check out this Wrath, like the rest of the others you teased.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:30:00 PM
    my goodness, what brought THIS on??? Hmmm, did I see this wrath yet? I think I saw that title somewhere below here. Now I gotta go see it!!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Hummm ,,, Blazing blue eyes... now that's like an image of cold and hot.... and i love it.... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Well well! This is certainly different from your previous work! It just goes to show that you can literally write anything. I was particularly taken with the electric shock description. I have to get my hands on this book when it's done! I want a signed copy! haha. Also, your "not a soup flirt" comment made me laugh. Thank you for the compliment! :)

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I' a loss for words! Imagine that! Wow! Absolutely amazing. He had to have blue eyes, right??? Love blue eyes. The Bastard! hee hee! I answered your last post about my book. No...It's going to have to wait. Don't make the mistake I did, Caleb. Get cracking on it now! With these bits and pieces you already have your first enthusiastic readers hungering for more! GO FOR IT!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Very spicy and sensual ..I love the sour twist in the end Caleb..I love it..Charma

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:34:00 AM
    going back to your other avatazr pic-- I actually was able to get a REAL good look at it before you changed it and I actually DID see your face! Honestly?? I felt like I was viewing those 5D images (or is it 4D) those magic eye thingies?? and then, wonder of all wonders, I SAW it-- it was an amazing, feel good feeling when the image CLICKED-- DUHHH I can be so blind sometimes~! Thanks for telling me it was your face-- yes, the camo definitely worked!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:31:00 AM
    I believe that is exactly what I would have thunk! That last line,-- snatched it out of my mind! If this is part of your fiction work, I hope you finish it soon, sounds intriguing and very promising! Btw. thank you for passing by my write for Linda and Royal-- and for telling me about your avatar! Now I see it is different! That is such a cute girl, is she your daughter? I can only imagine what made her scream (is she screaming?) --kids are so adorable!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
    ... I learned that we should never judge anyone (you bastard) after the first impression - well written Caleb. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Enjoyable steamy write. Nice one, Caleb. :)