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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:18:00 PM
    The Aborigines in Australia beleave our real lives are lived in Dream Time . There is a haunting feeling of something familiar in your words ;And I do enjoy the beauty of your insight. Love Michael

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:27:00 PM
    When she sleeps she s awake and when she s awake she dreams...very profound Catie

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:09:00 AM
    okay.... just for explanation....I did write this in the 3rd, 4th, 5th, and even 6th, person, but this poem is about the progression of my own dreams throughout my lifetime... LOL silly me! Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Oh! A super fresh poem here, Catie! Even as I am typing this comment, I am still trying to wrap my brain around the paradoxes of the last stanza. The opening stanza made me both wince and chuckle in complete sympathy and understanding.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Wow..........this is brilliant, but the metaphors written make me believe it is real. Perhaps revealing a childhood of sisters.......mother and her relationship, the sisters and their differences and the enterwining of all........which again tells me of complexities within a family that aren't ideal.....(most aren't)...sometimes throughout life, continue to cause pain/love/hurt/indifference? Am I reading too much into this... ? Did I say brilliant...? Yes I did...I still say it!