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haiku 24

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haiku 24

driftwood beached
in helpless tumbling water...
skeletons legacy

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Whoa!!What kind of skeletons??..Very descritpive work..Enjoyed reading..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..We are doing well even though we have some medical problems..We brought Cody home today from college for the summer...Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Phyllis, this is a very well-crafted haiku. I am impressed

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:43:00 PM
    skeletons legacy, beautiful. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Hey, big congrats to you, Lady!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Phyllis, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 6:31:00 PM
    Congrats on your wonderful win with a haiku l read over and over!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:48:00 PM
    I love this Phyllis...congratulations

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Donna
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:10:00 AM
    A mystery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you my haiku mentor
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:44:00 PM
    :) Oooh~ like this cool haiku;-) may check more of my poems later. Have a great week!!!!!

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you David
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:26:00 PM
    a few sylables off. 575 but this is very close. move up the in to the first line. but the last needs work. but the concept is perfect.

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks John but this is the English form not the traditional Japanese form
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 4/20/2013 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah, I was about to say that. A few syllables off, but wonderful job indeed
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 2:52:00 PM
    love this haiku, Phyl - you've said so much in three lines. Awesome. Good on you for posting the blog about IS. Hope you're all doing good and are set for a relaxing weekend, my friend x

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 12:39:00 AM
    very nice one, Phyllis. thanks for visiting my poems today!

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks my friend
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Hello Phyllis, a very xool haiku. the imagery is deep.... Linda

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks my friend
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 4:15:00 PM
    love the haiku ;} and I thank you for reading Fairy Tales, I wrote it because I was tired of waiting for her to get home ;} you have an awesome day phyllis ;}

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbie
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Well written Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/23/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anne Lise