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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:38:00 PM
    It don't matter if it's made up. It is beautiful. This might inspire to write a poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:52:00 PM
    I love, L0vE, lo-v-e this, very well done, going to fav's my poem I'll say good- by, I was 18 when I wrote so the boy was just a boy, them many yrs was 1 yr ;}he was not happy, I love your poem ;}

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Gayle, this is a very well constructed creation. Years ago I should have adopted the practice of labeling my writing 'fact or fiction'. I tell those who ask that I have not lived long enough to have broken all the hearts or have my heart broken all the times I've written about..... Inspiration comes from many places... Some by just listening...... Jake

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:53:00 AM
    What a roller coaster. I know this feeling from these lines all too well. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Gail this is so beautiful and touching! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Good poem Gail. Nicely written as usual.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:36:00 PM
    Gail this is very heart touching.....

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:03:00 PM
    This is a tender and expressive write my friend! I thoroughly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a pleasant and enjoyable piece this one truly is! Great Work!!