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A First Love Gone Rogue

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A First Love Gone Rogue

A first love gone rogue
A passion extinguished
A true heart crucified
Writhing and wrenching,
Under deception’s spikes
On infidelities twisted cross.
 
A secret kept, a truth untold
A new chapter unfolds
A young man’s search
For identities answer
Awakens a hurtful memory
Of a first love gone rogue

Will the destroyer of hearts
From one man’s distant past
Steal a victim from the present?
A simple test will put the question to rest
Will the truth sought be the one found?
Or will this be the lie most profound?

To love and to loath 
A first love gone rogue. 

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:40:00 AM
    Hello, Kim, :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/7/2013 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! It was a shock to me! I like your avatar.
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 12:35:00 PM
    congrats Kim on your win love it Shadow x smiles

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/5/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Kim, congrats on the win. This is a perfect story of the loss of the most memorable experience we all have at least once. Great word choices :)

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/3/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Karen!
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 10:26:00 AM
    an excellent write friend Kim. congratulations on your win :) hugs Maria

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/2/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Maria!
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:47:00 AM
    Congratulations Kim on your fabulous win. A great write. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/2/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:45:00 AM
    I can see why this poem was chosen, it is very good.

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/2/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Kim, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (one of your best ) contest. :-) SKAT

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 7/2/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You! I am surprised!
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:22:00 PM
    congrats ' NATE

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Kim, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/10/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You! Linda
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:53:00 AM
    thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT!
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 7:07:00 PM
    What a neat investigation of the heart you have established with an awesome rhythm of words. Your words are deep and intriguing. Whoo! Found another incredibly awesome poet! Always, Laura

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Hello Kim, I had a relationship that went rogue. Maybe it was all good for the new chapters coming up. loving and loathing ..... what a mix!! great poem ~*~ SKAT

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:26:00 AM
    Masterful write. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:45:00 PM
    This is deeply spoken...I enjoyed reading once again. Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! :)

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!