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Difficult Trials -Part 1-

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Difficult Trials -Part 1-

Turn the wheel
Out of curiosity
I'll be generous...you'll receive
Something special...something to make you whole
Though the trials you must run through
Are a great struggle that can easily
Pull you down
And I want to erase your frown

You will feel way better about yourself
Just trust me...take my hand...
I'll encourage you to have a satisfying time
Just for your own liking
We'll be hiking
Those somewhat difficult hardships 
Together for eternity 
We'll spend time in the future 
Together in unity

*******he sea...Let's flee and be free!
LOOK how nice you look!

Trample those insufferable nuisances
That dare put you down
To the sea floor
I'll push them to the core!

Feel free to walk the 
Road of Recovery 






 

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  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:31:00 AM
    Part one --- well written :)

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:16:00 PM
    ERRR>< stupid thing...I'll have to correct it laterz! Night everyone! Churn the sea...Let's flee and be free! LOOK how nice you look!