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Ridiculous Me

Watch this scene with both eyes and try not to blink C: --> 

I stood there... silently
Like a predator near prey 
I sneak behind YOU

You weren't even aware of it!! Ha-ha! 

I made YOU jump hIgH
Like a startled hare
I chuckle and smile

You know that mischievous smile of mine? 

Your reaction was
PRICELESS - you were so upset
But YOU forgave me

Well...I'm flattered. . . 

We laugh'd together (just like the good times)
In a chorus - our volume
Picked up extreme sound

Believe me - I could hear our laughter from a mile away!

But I'm glad I did
My best to make you giggle

Ridiculous me... 
Wouldn't you agree?

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  1. Date: 5/6/2014 7:27:00 PM
    10th on the list: Nothing beats the reactions people close to you when you shock their souls out of their bodies and you LOL to death in glee. This is lighthearted and fun. It sounds very fresh right after the series of dark poems I read. :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:39:00 AM
    You are sentimental and kind. All good!