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Til' Death Do We Part

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Til' Death Do We Part

She wants to know
That I'll always want her
She needs to know
That I'll always need her
She asks me if
I'll ever leave her
"No, baby ... never."
Because I know you'd find me .....
And kill me in my sleep


*For my darling wife and best friend of 11 years ... I'm so romantic! ;)

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Your surprise endings keep me coming back. Your wife must be so adorable .

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Hehehe! Another great one! She mustahve loved it! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Cute piece. Your wife must have a good sense of humor.

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:35:00 PM
    Haha! This is a fun read! You sure know how to put the clincher in your writes! That is awesome that you and your wife have been together for 11 years, you are both blessed to have each other! And that's nice to know you kind of remember my name, yes I think you have commented in my poems before, Caleb! pleased to meet you too! And yes, I think your avatar was different back then, not the "where's Caleb" one ;), that really made me squint, haha... but also you had some camo on your face on that other one...

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:04:00 PM
    This was so humorous and entertaining. I loved it!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Sounds just like my wife too, very funny. After 35 years, she'd come for me with an assault rifle.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Awww true love... Built from fear of being murdered in their sleep... LOL! I can tell it's genuine because if you're not really in love unless you can't make silly jokes like this now and then... Good stuff!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Romantic indeed!!! lol. Love it, Caleb. :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Lol.At least you know me.I think all women want to know that they're husbands will always be there.thanks for the poem .'

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 7:04:00 AM
    And you know you love it!!!!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:47:00 PM
    hahaha, you had me thinking such good thoughts about you until the ending!! So where is her comment on this one? I hope she has a sense of humor, Caleb!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:43:00 PM
    This is really cute!! Great sense of humour. This will either earn you a kiss or a slap from your wife... possibly both haha

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:54:00 AM
    Great poem. That's the way it should be, but sometimes - they want to fool around. In this life we all get what we deserve..... Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:28:00 AM
    ha ha, they should all be killed in their sleep, for even thinking of leaving ~*~SKAT.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:19:00 AM
    ... lol ... no, she kisses you .... and is happy that she found you - SWEET - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)