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AN INVITATION TO BETRAYAL Sapphic stanza

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AN INVITATION TO BETRAYAL Sapphic stanza

                                     AN INVITATION TO BETRAYAL

             
                         Felt the tickling of spring upon my upturned face

                         Felt the thunder-beating of my unfaithful heart

                         Took the outstretched hand that sought to guide me into bliss;
 
                         Sweetly I fell…..



Victoria Anderson-Throop
2013

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:38:00 AM
    Such feeling, Victoria. You sure made my heart jump. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:36:00 AM
    this is truly wonderful poetry, Victoria,

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop
    Date: 4/15/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    coming from you , Harry--this is heartfelt thanks....by the way, I am discovering a great affinity for this form...just when I was turning my back on writing poetry....i am hooked again!
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:23:00 PM
    "Felt the thunder-beating of my unfaithful heart". Great images, great lines.

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop
    Date: 4/15/2013 7:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for reading, Ndaba---an especially I appreciate it when someone cites lines that they like/dislike...it helps me understand if I am 'reaching' someone--I like this image you cited, too.. please keep in touch! Victoria
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:21:00 PM
    love this one, Vic - I've only ever tried this form once and really liked it : )