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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:50:00 AM
    I'm glad you used "when" instead of "if." You WILL finish the book! You have no choice, since we'll all bug the heck out of you until you do :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Well I'm glad I'm not the only one.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:33:00 PM
    Hilarious and cute (: Awesome rhyming and cheer Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:35:00 PM
    this is wonderful! i love the way you sneakily lured us to the very clever ending, using rhyme as bait. i very much enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 3:03:00 PM
    I love your eclectic nature and how you can go back and forth between homespun tales and gorgeous deep poems. Wish I could stay and see your other one but now it's time for me to get going. See ya later, Alligator.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Ow gee..a rock instead of snowballs : )and i used to.think i was naugjty..i must have been a nerd : ).Great story

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Hahaha yes! I love this! Even though you say this isn't completely true, I can picture you as a kid giving that doc a stern look. Too cute!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:01:00 PM
    the imagination of children is endless of course, very cute write Caleb, I wanted to stop and take the time to let you know how much I appreciated your comment on my write Angel Wings, you have a good heart, thank you for your support, hugs-x, Royal