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Ghostly Figures Roundel

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Ghostly Figures Roundel

the ghostly figures plea is to attend  
the mantel of life, to be and to see
if they are forgiven, needing a friend,
the ghostly figures plea.

heavy hearted, weary to be set free.
moonlight filters many shapes to amend, 
listening to Satan, not meant to be.

these figures once had a garden to tend, 
ignoring the warning ate of the tree,
now evicted, their souls can not prehend 
the ghostly figures plea.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:48:00 AM

    Awesome! Congrats on your win in the challenge.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you A.O. For commenting ...Seren.
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:34:00 PM

    Seren, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win. Take care and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you P.D. ,...Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:46:00 PM

    Congrats Seren on your wonderful winning poem xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you P.D. ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 5:39:00 PM

    An outstanding win on this difficult form. Well done, Seren. :-)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Was a shock to me to get a placement ...thnks for commenting .....Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Seren I love your take on this prompt. An excellent Roundel. Congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie for your comments ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Congratulations

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Judy ....Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 8:34:00 AM

    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Joseph , thanks for stopping and commenting ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:18:00 AM

    Congratulations Seren, You have done really well with your first Roundel. I like the mood of contrition in this. Hugs, SuZ

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol might be my last one as well, so difficult ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:18:00 AM

    Congratulations on winning in my PARADISE LOST - ROUNDEL contest, Seren. It was not an easy form or topic to write on. Love, Su

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 5/14/2013 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww Su was kind of you to place me, ....Seren
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:02:00 PM

    This is so captivating Seren. Great job as always. Luv, Gail

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 4/10/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail....Seren
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:15:00 AM

    i liked the second stanza Seren, enjoyed this one.. always ~p.d.~

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 4/10/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you PD...Seren
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:22:00 AM

    This is a perfect entry into the contest! I had written a Roundel that isn't based on her topic for the contest, because I needed to try it out! I hope I can write one as good as yours here! You really did this form very nicely! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! Quite the masterful piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 4/10/2013 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russell didnt have a clue wht I should be doing, just read Suzanne and hoped....Seren
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:19:00 AM

    This was very deep. I loved the atmospheric tone here. Very well done!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 4/10/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake my first attempt.... Seren