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Below is the poem entitled Color Show which was written by poet Donna Jones. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Color Show

vivid green cedar
against winter's bare oak tree
red bird sits alone

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 10:42:00 AM
    I do like the colors! The scene brings to mind contentment and solitude. I love haiku's ability to dialogue memories... almost like having a journal, but in bite-size chunks instead of whole passages. Good haiku work!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Beautiful image! It speaks for itself!! Bravo

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/1/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sean...
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Creative color Donna....Congratulations...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/1/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So kind Judy
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Donna! I can visualize the scene... So great! Love, Hanitra

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/27/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are kind..thanks...
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 3:20:00 AM
    Hi Donna, what a great poem and a grand win.... congrats...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/23/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Chuma ...
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on such a remarkable winning haiku.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Than you so much carol.....:-)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:55:00 AM
    Beautiful haiku Donna!...Congratulations - Tim

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tim ...so nice of you.....:-)
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Just stopping by to let you know that there is now a blog offering some extra comments on the contest. Have a great weekend!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for sponsoring and honoring my poem Isaiah ....
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Congratulations. This is really beautiful. Love, SuZ

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) thank Suz.....very nice...
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Congrats Donna on your grand win~A.O

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A.O. so kind....thanks.....
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Vivid.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey...I like that word......thanks...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:43:00 PM
    Great job!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard....
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:20:00 PM
    yup very nice haiku [no capitals necessary ;)] congrad's on your win Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always appreciate you Debbie....thanks...
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciate your support Joseph
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Ahh...this is gorgeous, Donna!! Congratulations!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thank you Carrie...again...your smile makes my day...
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Congratulations Donna, very colourful writeTake care, Richard

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciate it Richard...have a great day...
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Well done Donna.......Seren

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks sweetie....
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Donna. Short and colorful. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks dearest...
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Congratulations, Donna. First haiku I've seen from you, personally. You would have fooled me completely. Cheers, Roy

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah Roy ...this contest was for firsts.....sooooo with help...my first haiku....thanks...
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:38:00 AM
    This is an excellent Haiku which I extremely enjoyed reading my dear friend Donna! No wonder why i read many congratulatory comments here 'cuz it really deserved its great win! Hope I'm not yet late to say as well! Congratulations with big hugs to you, not only on your win but on this outstanding haiku of yours. Thank you so much for sharing and for your very inspiring comments on my ABC poem as well. My great honor for sharing my poem w/ your sister. Million thanks! love lots, Leonora

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/21/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks dearest Leonora...you are never too late..I look forward to your sweet words of encouragement...have a great new week.....
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