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WHITE ROSES

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WHITE ROSES

             dove grey dress
counterpoint to
white roses 
             wedding vows pledged
             in five minute ceremony



waste overflowing
                 wilted rose buds 
choices  
made yesterday 
                unmistakable stench


Forms: Tanka and Kyoka

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 4:02:00 AM
    This says so much Sue..Should be put on my daughter`s door when she grows up to make the right.choice and good decisions to last a life~time..Lovely

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Dear Suzette, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I am not much of a real poet & honestly I did not understand this POETIC Portrait. A " five minute Ceremony" not true LOVE to me. Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Soup Mail

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    Date: 4/16/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You got the point of the tanka and the kyoka (the latter being in contrast to the more optimistic tanka), namely Act in Haste, Repent at Leisure. Regards, Su
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 7:51:00 AM
    "Tain't it The Ttuth"! Definently as wow wow....thanks

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:54:00 AM
    - Lovely, Suzette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)