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Green wave

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Green wave

a wave of green
carrying me away
to a land of hope
a place with just peace
the green wave flowing along the tough hill
screaming the impossible I will kill
the soft leaves running on the face of rocks
changing every unpleasant view
green carries welfare,true
the green wave running through me
planting harmony
with earth
what a lovely view,
what a dreamy place!

inspired by:

http://ajaytao2010.wordpress.com/2013/04/08/maravian-field-marek-kiedrowski/#comment-17502

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 9:45:00 AM

    Beautifully done Yassmin! I like how you said 'just peace', it brings out more than just calmness, it shows serenity. Very well penned!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 12:36:00 AM

    To contemplate the beauty is to find peace. Lovely Yassmin.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:52:00 AM

    - A nice poem to read Yassmin, like it very much. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    ElNazer Avatar Yassmin ElNazer Date: 4/10/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    glad you liked it,I loved your poems to:)