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Haiku 34 - Oklahoma Cycle

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Haiku 34 - Oklahoma Cycle

	

        Dim sunrise,
	gray day, darkness
	Winter sadness.
	
		•

	Sweet sunrise,
	warning sirens.
	Spring threat.
	
		•

	White-hot sunrise,
	burnt crops.
	Summer killing.

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	Cool sunrise,
	dead falling leaves. 
	Autumn closure.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:30:00 PM
    That was a nice set and great title for it.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/9/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks... The seasons are dramatic here, but lately more extreme. I hope it gets no worse. Jack
  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Jack; I love all four. Thanks - you did great..... Lucilla

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/8/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Lucilla. Oklahoma weather is more problematic every year. Jack
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I really love the way you did these haiku, absolutely gorgeous. Well done, Jack! Have a great day! :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/7/2013 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot, Anne. I really appreciate the compliment. Jack
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:55:00 AM
    ooo, you got the images down perfect... Love them all Jack...Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/7/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, PD. It's just that time of year. Jack
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Yep!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/7/2013 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I woke this morning thinking about tornados, and this just popped into my head. I guess it's the coming bad weather. Jack
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:42:00 AM
    - Four good haiku ... I like all of them, you are so clever with haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/7/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne-Lise. I hope you had a good weekend. Jack
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Jack, great set of haiku's ....David

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/7/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, David. Tornado season is upon us here in Oklahoma. Jack