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Moon

I can barely see the path before me It’s lit by a meager light in the sky It takes every effort for me to see The only light is the moon I see by Gorgeous path has barely a light around It’s lit by a meager light in the sky The light is weak but can be seen abound I follow the pathway that leads forward Gorgeous path has barely a light around Can’t clearly see where I’m going onward The path winds all about the dim courtyard I follow the pathway that leads forward Moon illumines quite little in the yard There’s no harmony that’s pieced together The path winds all about the dim courtyard Look at the moon it shines in nice weather I can barely see the path before me There’s no harmony that’s pieced together It takes every effort for me to see
Entered into Lisa Cooper Poetessdarkly's "I love you to the moon and back" contest 4/7/2013

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:23:00 AM
    I loved this write Russel, great work and good luck on the contest.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Russell, once again you took me to on a journey with this piece of yours. Wishing you all the best for Lisa's contest with this gem :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Russell this is a great entree for the contest, I like this a lot..David

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Dear Russell, the moonlight is amazing, no matter how far its beams stray. I have never searching deep through every path in life. Your effort in following this beaut, clearly makes sense. The light is only weak in front of me, when searching for the right path. However, im glad the moon is one whose light guides when all I'd dim...love your poem...Linda