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Two birds -old version-

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Two birds -old version-

What were those
hoots, we crossed
and heard
night's premonitions
tied in sheaf;
they fled in dusk -
two mourning birds
guess were our
marginal beliefs.

Two birds have
passed, of gray and
straight arrows fled
to vanish yon
our longest trip on
railway tracks,
they'll guide in
solitude and conn.

Upon our train have
sat the birds,
the passengers won't
go to stars,
but just the
emptiness of words,
that rhymes with
unforgotten mars.

Unmoved the riders
in the cars,
and iced the engine
pilot's gaze,
the train becomes
sins' iron bars,
and death's
advancement to souls

The souls imprisoned
trail along,
the train's odd
destiny to nights,
that wait through
nothingness and
our trip to reach
infinite heights.

© G.V. 01-19-2013
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(Gothic - Iambic

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:51:00 PM
    As Oprah would say, that's a wow wow...thanks

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/9/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lovely answer. Thank you!