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I shall betray you

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I shall betray you

I shall betray you, you just said,
cause life is a lone roses' bed,
thread twined and weaved on canvas grid.

The leaves turn yellow you just said,
because the garlands only fade,
adornment hung - on lonely door.
With eminent the lights outside,
impertinent the thorns inside,
the mistle droplets shine on road.

In air descends guarded her veil
I splendid emptiness inhale,
marquee of stars is my abode.

The cadence of my heart's her grace
aloneness that discerns and prays,
- her eyes that stare to nightly fields.

The rain adjoins whom she embraced
when wet my finger tips outraced
her tears and face - caressed eye lids.
Arrows of thoughts, that guide my quill
destined to leave, are scared and still,
celestial hue and coastal shore.

Without your voice, my quest and role,
a glassy dome, my soul's extol,
in dark I see your glance's mead.

© 04-05-2013, All rights reserved

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  1. Date: 1/31/2014 4:10:00 PM
    congrats to your fine win,,,

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:26:00 AM
    Beautiful expression in your lines, no one portrays emotions which such depth and such intensity! and I can never be as talented as you are. Congrats on your 1st place win in this contest!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:26:00 PM
    Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the first win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:00:00 PM
    Beautiful poem penned G, congrats on your winning 1stPlace, your a first rate writer, xxx

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 6:20:00 PM
    - Nice to read your first poem,Giorgio ! - Also enjoyable that you got the first place in the contest - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 5:36:00 PM
    This is deep, Giorgio. I love every verse. Favs. Congrats and poetic embraces!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 5:02:00 PM
    I note the old pen was as good as the new. As always your rhymes impress. Congrats on your win. Ron

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 4:59:00 PM
    well giorgio, it doesn't surprise me to find this poem is yours! from the first time I read it I had it marked as a probable 1st place...I'm a sucker for romance,and this was certainly romantic, and very beautiful, though bittersweet...out of the poems of yours that I've read so far I think this is my favourite, because I like the more personal touch in it - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:57:00 PM
    first poem,,,, very nice as always ;}

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:13:00 PM
    I just came to read your first poem here and its wonderfully penned.You stir so much emotions through these worfs..Magnifique : )

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:22:00 PM
    I came to see your very first post and it was this one I already saw. Now I understand . It probably was not your very first entry in a contest but was the first version of your redo!! I see you have not been here long and yet you have put up many poems. Way to go!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:03:00 PM
    Hi; i came to read your first poem. It is very well written. I enjoyed reading it very much. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy being here.........Lucilla