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My family

It is when the 
morning 
of that day shows 
that i 
realise lonely i shall 
be
It is when he says 
take 
care my son and she 
says i love you son 
that i 
realise what is life 
without them
It is when she looks 
at 
me & say 'I LOVE 
YOU' 
that i realise 'I LOVE 
HER MOR

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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:17:00 AM
    A very good first offering to the soup. A belated welcome.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Patrick, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Nothing like the bonds of family to make us feel loved and accepted, have a beautiful day, and please write some more, I am waiting, ? xxx

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Welcome to P/Soup Patrick.. from a fellow S/African :) This is a wonderful poem about the importance of family-- well written.

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    Date: 4/9/2013 10:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you kim. Blessed day.