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Upon a Bed of Petals

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Upon a Bed of Petals

Slowly I lay down
upon a bed of petals,
So soft and so strong;
Blissful perennial joy,
Smile, remember all year long

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Congrats Meleni.. Beautiful piece~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:22:00 PM

    Melani, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Nice write! J

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:39:00 PM

    congrats Melani ....Seren

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Congratulations Melani xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:02:00 AM

    This poem was so peaceful in just the little lines you expressed it touched my heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs and luv,Gail