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Upon A Bed Of Petals

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Upon A Bed Of Petals

I am holding my hands over my eyes,
I want to listen to what sound resides.

I can hear the waves beating on the ground.
The slow rhythm of each wave as it pounds.

The squawk of a bird, I can hear far away.
Soft whispers, as the wind has something to say.

I settle back on the ground to listen.
On the warm ground I purr like a kitten.

The warmth I feel from the sun on my face.
Thoughts are roaming through time and through space.

I have a peace of mind it’s hard to explain.
Like the coolest water from a short summer rain.

My body settles down so softly in this land.
I’m lying upon a bed of petals in the sand.


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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Dear Donald, Got all my senses motivated with YOUR descriptive vivid imagery.If I write the wrong word in a POEM it stays there Forever. No body ever tells me I made a mistake. Probably because if they did it once they know they don't have time to say something Everytime I miscue. Another Classic.Congratulations With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 5:47:00 PM

    Dear Donald, Got all my senses motivated with YOUR descriptive vivid imagery.If I write the wrong word in a POEM it stays there Forever. No body ever tells me I made a mistake. Probably because if they did it once they know they don't have time to say something Everytime I miscue. Another Classic.Congratulations With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 3:43:00 PM

    Very good Donald, nice story, great flow, good luck in the contest.Take care Regards Richard

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Every word is a synchronized step towards piece, I can feel your emotions, this is a true sign of a good writer, have a blessed day Donald, use your gifted pen more often, your poems are a pleasure to read, Rose M xxx

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:31:00 AM

    - A beautiful poem, Donald. - Good luck in the contest! // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Pretty poem , Congratulations on your membership

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Hello Fellow Lifetime Souper: A very relaxing read ....however, do you really mean 'pedals' LOL

    Williams Avatar Donald Williams Date: 4/3/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    uhm, that was a great catch LOL I have no idea what I was thinking. The circumstances of doing these from work I suppose @_@ ;)