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Before the Party

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Before the Party

Her mind is like an upbeat child who sees delicious cakes;
Her mind is like a lukewarm breeze that passes with no breaks
Her mind is like a whoosh of chaos rising from the sea;
Her mind is shouting over everything, because she’s a bride to be.
 
Bring her a bowl of cream with fruit piled on the side;
Make her laugh and let her ponder the thought of who’s waiting inside;
Then oh so swiftly tuck her slim frame into the cloth that you weaved;
Because she’s about to enter the party, where she's a bride to be.

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:38:00 PM
    Party poem, you have to like a party poem!!! Very nice Angel -Very nice! MC

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 8/6/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol I only wrote it as a school assignment. Thank you though.
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 1:29:00 PM
    .... and the party was successful ..... - the couple answered: I do ! A nice poem to read Angel! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 4/15/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I only wrote this one for a school assignment, I'm not good at these types of poems. Lol, thank you and I like how you finished it. [:
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:46:00 AM
    good writing may you keep them coming

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 4/9/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Fred
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Interesting poem.

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 8/6/2013 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Oooh...this is beautifully written!!

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 8/6/2013 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.