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  1. Date: 3/26/2014 10:15:00 AM
    Loved this Tanka. Both song and singer relate well to my memory :) cu // paul

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:14:00 PM
    Hola, Scribe, I came back to follow up on the poem., about poets unfavoriting you. (And I alike) I know 4 of the poets who removed me these past days... Yasmin, Frank, Sandy, and Roger, I don't know if they belong to the same group... But, my 12 now 13 can all go to hell... I will remove this comment by morning.. Giving you the heads up, on the little I know. Take care of yourself.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:51:00 PM
    I knew I was missing something... JK.... goodnight... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:43:00 PM
    Oh the irony! Hey there! I haven't read your poems for a long time. Cool tanka here! I wanna say thanks a million for your comments on my work. I appreciate your words. Write on! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:52:00 AM
    An interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it.. *hug* ~ Shirley

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:19:00 AM
    How ya doin' Scribe? I'm good, just have had writers block for quite awhile. I also moved over to Writerscafe. Over on that site everything is free unlike this site. Come on over and check it out.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:22:00 PM
    This is really beautiful. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:40:00 PM
    This is good. Great honor. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:59:00 AM
    This was charming & deep. I always have music in my head. It keeps the "voices" out. ;)

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:12:00 PM
    The biblical. refrence in the title is quite stimulating. I too often have songs playing in my head. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:52:00 AM
    I am not familiar with the song or singer, but yes, it sure is amazing when two people share the same thoughts at the same moment,,,

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:08:00 AM
    awesome tanka friend Scribe : thanks for sharing. Good day always :) hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Great work honoring Denise Williams and her talent..Thanks for stopping by..At church yesterday, our pastor did a sermon using a soldier's story as illustration for his message..He told a boy fourteen years old who ran away from home, lied about his age, and joined up in the army during WWII..He was so young and maybe small that they used him as a deck hand on the ship and someone to keep things clean..When they went ashore, he was not supose to go and did not even have a weapon..Sara

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    That's a testimony that miracles still happen... Goosebumps!
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    Date: 5/27/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    He grabbed a weapon from someone dead and went on up on the island fighting..He and four more ended up in a foxhole together..One got killed..The enemy threw in a grenade and he kicked it out..Then another grenade came in and he fell on it..He survived and had to have 20 surgeries..Sara
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Hi Scribe, stopping by to drop a smile :-) It was nice seeing you on line today. I'm watching an old flick called "Killer Clowns from space..." lol.. very lame hu! what have you been u to. nothing much under my sunny days here in Texas... :-)... see u later Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:58:00 PM
    I haven't heard of the singer I am so out of tune! ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:50:00 AM
    Hey fam..I just maybe heading that way towards retirement..waiting on you. Lol

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    Date: 5/20/2013 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have thoughts that will not materialize. Im going to purchase a muse...lol
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Hi Scribe :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. Okay, the real reason I'm here.. I know you will find your way to my newest poem soon. called "Summers Eve"... I hope you don't mind I thought of this poem, when i wrote this line in my poem... " I AM THE SPAWN OF ADAM'S RIB."... he he he.. I had to give my poem a small little twist... PD

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:02:00 PM
    hoping to see a new one from you soon...Linda

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM
    Just dropping in knw it's been a while, but guess who's back, love always fam<3 Carma

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Dear Marlon, I am so sorry to hear about your daughter and your mom, they say when it rains it pours, hope they are recovering well, and yes, anytime you want to dance, give me a shout, and we will make beautiful poetry together, have a great evening, xxxx Rose

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