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Missing Rib

Should we be amazed,
Denise Williams song "Silly"
Rotates in my head,
A song she forgot about
In her ear it resonates

Scribe Marlon Linton

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  1. Date: 3/26/2014 10:15:00 AM

    Loved this Tanka. Both song and singer relate well to my memory :) cu // paul

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:43:00 PM

    Oh the irony! Hey there! I haven't read your poems for a long time. Cool tanka here! I wanna say thanks a million for your comments on my work. I appreciate your words. Write on! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:52:00 AM

    An interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it.. *hug* ~ Shirley

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:19:00 AM

    How ya doin' Scribe? I'm good, just have had writers block for quite awhile. I also moved over to Writerscafe. Over on that site everything is free unlike this site. Come on over and check it out.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:22:00 PM

    This is really beautiful. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:40:00 PM

    This is good. Great honor. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:59:00 AM

    This was charming & deep. I always have music in my head. It keeps the "voices" out. ;)

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:12:00 PM

    The biblical. refrence in the title is quite stimulating. I too often have songs playing in my head. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:52:00 AM

    I am not familiar with the song or singer, but yes, it sure is amazing when two people share the same thoughts at the same moment,,,

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:08:00 AM

    awesome tanka friend Scribe : thanks for sharing. Good day always :) hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:38:00 AM

    Great work honoring Denise Williams and her talent..Thanks for stopping by..At church yesterday, our pastor did a sermon using a soldier's story as illustration for his message..He told a boy fourteen years old who ran away from home, lied about his age, and joined up in the army during WWII..He was so young and maybe small that they used him as a deck hand on the ship and someone to keep things clean..When they went ashore, he was not supose to go and did not even have a weapon..Sara

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 5/27/2013 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's a testimony that miracles still happen... Goosebumps!
    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 5/27/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He grabbed a weapon from someone dead and went on up on the island fighting..He and four more ended up in a foxhole together..One got killed..The enemy threw in a grenade and he kicked it out..Then another grenade came in and he fell on it..He survived and had to have 20 surgeries..Sara
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:58:00 PM

    I haven't heard of the singer I am so out of tune! ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:50:00 AM

    Hey fam..I just maybe heading that way towards retirement..waiting on you. Lol

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 5/20/2013 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have thoughts that will not materialize. Im going to purchase a muse...lol
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Just dropping in knw it's been a while, but guess who's back, love always fam<3 Carma

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Dear Marlon, I am so sorry to hear about your daughter and your mom, they say when it rains it pours, hope they are recovering well, and yes, anytime you want to dance, give me a shout, and we will make beautiful poetry together, have a great evening, xxxx Rose

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:54:00 PM

    I love Denise Williams, always have. Soupmail :) hugs, catie

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:26:00 AM

    Great poem. It's making me think hard. Love the tanka

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:47:00 PM

    I don't get this one but I know it's based on my lack of knowledge. I still enjoyed reading it. :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Welcome back Marlon! xxx

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:02:00 PM

    I'm sadly lacking in knowledge of who's who in the music world but this one of your makes it's own music. Has a nice lilt to it! :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:04:00 AM

    You mentioned some of my favourite artists in that comment of yours. You had me smiling had to come back to tell you :) enjoy the weekend!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Love the Tanka fam...I agree with Wilma's comment!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:01:00 AM

    This is nice and reminded me of a great song, "Get Out Of My Mind, And Into My Car" how Ironic, fantastic, piece, Fam.. Love always Carma

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 5:13:00 AM

    Poet Linton,I just love listening to oldies.Kinda bring the mindset back to times long gone,but still has that "feel-good" era to it and I guess will bring that to generations in the future.Thanks for your great comment earlier this week.Im slowly but surely heading back into the game again,taking one day at the time.Take Care Poet!

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Would it be silly of me to admit that is one of my favourite songs Scribe? Needless to say I absolutely love this write of yours. You always take my mind into another realm, which is a good thing ;) hope you are doing good!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 2:08:00 PM

    I trust your taste Scribe - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:46:00 PM

    hmmm, I think this must be a song I don't know. I like what you did with it though. songs get stuck in our minds and I have had some that I just could not get them out of my mind!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/3/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea! The song is a goodie, but an oldie.
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Very cute and clever Marlon! An excellent TANKA with perfect meter. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/3/2013 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 12:33:00 PM

    - Do not know the song .... but turn up the volume so I can hear .... well done Marlon! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/2/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...i can dig that poet. Thanks!
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:42:00 AM

    hey now this is truly a wondrous Tanka, Well i know you are not indeed just out to score, yet your poetry does it for me...

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/2/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its a true story...a few months back, This song was in my mind. Out the blue my wife said to me I don't know why I'm hearing Denise W. singing silly of me...she sung the exact part that played in my mind. A song that old, just couldn't be coincidental. Thanks for the words of kindness Harry!