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Haiku 31

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Haiku 31

        



        The garden has tears 
	on lonely paths.
	You know where to look.

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:56:00 PM

    wow, wonderfully sad.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/6/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If I recall correctly, I was feeling down the day I wrote it. Cloudy weather does that for me. Jack
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 4:51:00 PM

    Hummm???? Touching.....Donna

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/2/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Donna. Jack
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 11:24:00 AM

    You are turning into quite a haiku expert, Jack! This one is truly wonderful.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/2/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Heather. That's a mighty fine comment from one of the best Soup-poets. Jack
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:03:00 AM

    This one really hit me, Jack...love it!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/2/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Caleb. I appreciate the nice comment. Jack
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 7:29:00 AM

    - Plant lots of flowers friends in your garden .... they smell so good .... thanks for the lovely haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/2/2013 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're welcome, Anne-Lise. Flowers are a great idea. It might not be so lonely. Jack