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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:41:00 PM
    Good write David, enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:48:00 AM
    many wonderful lines. hope you are well....xox ~ Tex

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Great collab David, Loved this picture you painted. Just beautiful.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 6:10:00 PM
    very nicely done Dave ;} thank you for reading "remember us" alzheimer is a lonely disease, my parents had good memories, so knock on wood for me ;}

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 5:34:00 PM
    and way down south , in Aussie land the Sand Goannas balk, lunatics pelting cricket ball, where can a lizard walk ....

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Very life affirming! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:12:00 PM
    David, this is truly awesome. Your poem played through my mind like a movie. Into my faves it goes!

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Just saw the "welcome" cue: Soyez le bienvenu! Welcome! Willkommen! Bienvenido! Vanakkam! Selamat Datang! Huanying! Every good wish for your journey through PS. Wignesan

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 7:35:00 PM
    See, Poet-David, you have 4 poems on the "Top 100 Recent Poems" list. Great collaboration -- this sensory-appealing poem is a treat to read. Hmmm, by the time I was done reading this, I had a slight twinge of nostalgia about the fleeting nature of time, and how important it is to make sure to enjoy each moment as much as possible.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:11:00 PM
    nice write I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Beautiflly written. I can see Austrailia in the stunning imagery.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:43:00 AM
    David, this poem really speaks to the senses. You have a way of making the reader connect sensually (and by that I don't mean sexually) with your work, and you do it so well. Best, Jeremy

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:37:00 AM
    a beautiful poem Dave..Wonderful collab. I imagined myself there..nice journey

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 7:58:00 PM
    A very fine collab I must say. A splendid write! And thank you for you comments on my latest write.I wasn't sure anyone would grasp it? :o)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Great one, David. A lazy day! Love it :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:49:00 PM
    I love so many of the lines in this poem as they heighten senses that we so often ignore.." Butterflies hover below cobalt skies".. such vivid colours are invoked by this line. You continue to inspire me.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:05:00 PM
    This is an AWESOME collaboration!!! Thanks always for the visits David..You two did a great job with the imagery here. Love the flow.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:33:00 AM
    A beautiful collabration with your daughter in law,David.And thanks alot for stopping by the other day my friend:) Yep,you indeed own the room today! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Just wonderful David...I relate to every word....thanks for this wonderful picture...Donna

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:38:00 PM
    oh, yes, this one. Superb writing. I see the word agenda, and I am thinking PFT challenge??