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Crocodile Tears

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Below is the poem entitled Crocodile Tears which was written by poet maggie huffman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Crocodile Tears

i ate the chocolate mint


in typical hedonist fashion
i devoured it

licked off a bit of sweet 
that clung to the 

crocodile picture 

enclosed


slathered my tongue over the wrapper's 
inner side 

envirocandy


endangered species


read the card



felt






something

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:10:00 AM
    Maggie was it guilt? It is an excellent write....David

    huffman Avatar maggie huffman
    Date: 4/7/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes...no...it was good candy...thanks for your comments...very encouraging!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 5:34:00 PM
    Nicely written Maggie. Namaste. Rick

    huffman Avatar maggie huffman
    Date: 4/7/2013 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Namaste, Rick, and thank you
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Good one, Maggie :). Taking one through the process. I like the end "felt something".

    huffman Avatar maggie huffman
    Date: 4/7/2013 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Toquyen...you're very encouraging and insightful