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in the sand

between the grains of sand
all my dreams shattered apart
a cup of my coffee spilled in between
 dissolved between the salty waves
 disappeared
just like a lost dream
between the grains of sand a lost life 
so things seem
no matter how hard I hold on
everything  from between my fingers slip
just like sand   grains
lost between life's sea waves in endless vain
one thing that would remain
that would be pain


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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 5:37:00 AM
    - Yassmin, you have written a really good poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you get much pleasure to share your thoughts and words in the form of poems here with us! - Good luck. - Continue with your poems, I want to read more from you in the future. - Have a nice sunny day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    ElNazer Avatar Yassmin ElNazer
    Date: 4/3/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot glad that you liked it:)
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 9:59:00 PM
    I love the beach so you talking about sand and grains of sand makes me thing of summers I spent watching the ocean sitting on a beach towel somewhere at the Jersey Shore. Sand in my toes and needing to shower afterwards because. Sand also makes me think of a timer and Time in general.

    ElNazer Avatar Yassmin ElNazer
    Date: 4/3/2013 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I LOVE the beach too,your comment reminded me of Dido's song:I still got sand in my shoes :)
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Welcome Yasmin, I could feel the emotion expressed in your lovely poem. Blessings

    ElNazer Avatar Yassmin ElNazer
    Date: 4/4/2013 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so sweet of you :)
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 6:05:00 AM
    And poem of power emotions, well written. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste Rick

    ElNazer Avatar Yassmin ElNazer
    Date: 3/30/2013 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so sweet of you:)