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Golden Skies

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Golden Skies

With love I look at you
And see your eyes transform 
To gaze into depths
Which carry a secret storm 
A ring as dark as night
Around a golden sky 
With speckles of dark stars
That bring my lips a sigh 
They hold the world's wonders
A box of sins and hurt 
A glimmer of light
That glows just like hope 
With love you look at me
And I see into your eyes
Your soul bare and naked 
From me you do not hide 
Their gentle with a sadness
They shine as you laugh 
They hold both parts equal 
Experience of life and death
You stay hidden to the world
But you open up to me
And in your eyes my Darling
I see everything there is to see
With soft lashes they appear
Angelic in their own way 
I watch as they close 
And your anger drifts away
Unclothed I see your soul
In the doorway of your eyes
I could stare into them forever 
Lost without a sense of time 

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Very good poem.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Lovemaking in the deep touch of your sight Jay - real warm love in this poem - a dream I could be proud of, fascinated with - eyelashes entwined in electric adoration - I love the storm element/description - beautiful mystery - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:53:00 AM
    Oh my goodness, I haven't read your work in quite a while! I was just going through my faves list to catch up on my favorite poets and came across your name- I am SO glad I did! This is AMAZING!!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:20:00 PM
    A lovely poem, Jay. - Happy Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)