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Rabbit Hole

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Rabbit Hole

Oh "darn" where did that cat get to ? 

Did you ever have that feeling. 
That you keep seeing something. 
Just like out of your vision of sight.
 
That cat will sleep anywhere. 
He makes me so darn mad. 

You know just like in that movie.
You know that movie "don't you" 
The name seems to escape me.


I'll be so late if I don't get a move on. 
I really must feed my Tom Cat first.
He is always disappearing somewhere.

I really must go,,, my tea party is waiting. 
I do wonder if the twins will be guest hosts. 
Maybe he's ran down that rabbit hole again.


He's always playing these sorts of games. 
Here you are , I have found you at  last. 
Silly cat ~ he was hiding under my hat. 




1  27  2012  fri,,, 11pm 
Poetry Challenge #12 on Temple, on another site, one of the guys always did  challenges, this one he put up a pic of Alice looking just behind a curtain. This was my take.     

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Oh, I find that reading something I enjoy will always draw pictures or scenes in my mind...I just had to look up the old original pictures of the "Cheshire Cat". Reading your writes is sending me off on fantastical adventures, Debbie.:) Keep well...love, Mikki

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/24/2013 7:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mikki ;}
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 11:50:00 PM
    Very cute, it gave a very nice taste to my morning, thank you for sharing

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/11/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter ;}
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:27:00 PM
    yes cats can almost drive you wild, with little games sweet honey child...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/11/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Don ;}
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:18:00 AM
    One book that I have never read and even when I see clips of movies about it somehow it never appealed to my senses and now I wonder why. Must read that book. love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/18/2013 12:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Phyllis ;} you need to watch Johnny Depp.
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 5:45:00 PM
    I loooove AIW....thanks for the visual! Really enjoyed this :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 8:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Very cute write Debbie, Made me smile! Thanks!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/8/2013 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 12:31:00 PM
    It was the mouse you saw last night. When you thought you saw something just out of sight. The cat was there to see it too. Those things that are just out of view. So when the hairs tickle on your toes. Just remember it could be the mouses nose. :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/8/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    cute ;}
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 1:54:00 AM
    how wonderful to enjoy your fabulous write my sweetest sista Debbie :) thank you so very much for sharing the pleasure <3 much luv and lights <3 Sk

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/5/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you my sweet friend ;}
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 11:05:00 PM
    The rabbit in Wonderland is one of my favorite storybook characters ......cute little poem that added some fun to my day

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/5/2013 12:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:46:00 AM
    That must be the Cheshire Cat, Alice. Like your imagination. LOve, daver

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/1/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:25:00 PM
    It's always nice to see a little fantasy weaved into regular existence. (Since I know you do this without drugs). You have a great imagination and make fun connections. I love how you relate things about your life in your work. It is always so refreshing. Anyhow--have a happy easter. Thinking of you and your lovely work!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/31/2013 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Duke ;}
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:13:00 PM
    I came to see if you had a new poem and noticed in my remark on this one, I had said hate instead of hat. good grief. But I am sure you knew what I meant!!

    johnson Avatar robert johnson
    Date: 4/8/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like the hate remark. Puts quite the mind spinning twist to it.
    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 4/4/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea: I found where you can edit your posts and it is in a place you would never expect. I am going to make a Blog Post about it.
    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/31/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did not even notice ;}
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 12:13:00 PM
    Your last line bears the final. Wonderfully done. Thanks................., loved always, bl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/30/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ;}
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:18:00 AM
    How adorable is this! I really like it, Deb. :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morning..I plan on adding some more to my work "Death Angel" but I don't know when ..Maybe this afternoon..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 11:30:00 PM
    this was charming. I love how he finally appeared under your hate. Cute!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 11:00:00 PM
    This was a good poem. Debbie, what site was that - that they had challenges? I was in one like that. Was that Poet's Work Shop? They always did this and also they would tag someone and that person had to write a poem. That site closed up. Have a Happy Easter..... Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2013 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    'Hello Lucilla,,, it was not Poet's Workshop,
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Enjoyable to read, Debbie! - Have a great Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}