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Vows to my True Love

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Vows to my True Love

Like the smallest intake of air; I deserve not. Like a fantasy and dream of a woman to have, honor, cherish and love till death; I deserve not. But God has been so good to me, even through the sins amongst my internal image that I've committed several times over. Confessions after confessions after confessions, and yet, I'm breathing in an abundance of air and I've been blessed with a woman that's greater than any fantasy and dream of many dreams. Thank you Father for blessing me...(sigh) Thank you.
Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 03-27-2013

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  1. Date: 3/12/2014 9:37:00 PM

    Dashing my way through your poems. Saw you online, thought you might of had a new one for us to read... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 8:43:00 PM

    I like this poem and the hour glass shape. Honest words you have here

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:30:00 PM

    This is a beautiful poem. You're emotions seep through. I loved it (: -Maricel

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:57:00 AM

    My dear friend, I read this and think we must have married sisters...Jake

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:29:00 PM

    Simply put... excellent and honest.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Hey Ink, I love this one, She must be a special Lady!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Wow!!! What a expression of true, deep words that are felt , from the heart.....just lovely,,Cherie

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Beautiful poem...she's a lucky woman.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Great that you would write this one honoring the woman that you love..Sara

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:41:00 PM


  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:18:00 PM

    is it an hour glass? one thing it is is a nice tribute.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:20:00 PM

    That moment of silence with the sigh was perfect. It really does show how thankful you are. Such a powerful poem. I really enjoyed reading some of your work today! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:03:00 PM

    very well writing I liked it very much

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Thanks for a comment,your poem is nicely done I like it ,Ivy

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:41:00 PM

    Thanks for the comment, and very nice poem.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:34:00 PM

    Ink* you are blessed and this is sweet... .. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda"

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Mister you are so good. You work always flows smoothly and draws me in. It's like candy good to the last drop.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:44:00 AM

    Re-reading this masterpiece. You rock! :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:07:00 AM

    I felt like sighing too Pace and it made me smile.. Beautiful piece of poetry and I love the sincerity of this write of yours. Hope you are enjoying the weekend :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:02:00 AM

    wow the sincerity comes through here, a time capsule of time reverberates through this hour glass..

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:45:00 PM

    There's such an appreciative, humbling atmosphere to this poem(and the hourglass shape analogy is cool too). Actually, a poem such as this, makes one want to hang one's ego at the door(I haven't become tired of that cliche yet). So, does this mean you're getting married soon? At least playing 'house'? Playing 'doctor'?(Haha! Pace, I am just being light-hearted!)

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 12:09:00 PM

    very nice and beautiful I hope you the best go on

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Like sands through this hourglass...excellent lines.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:03:00 AM

    Lovely as ever :-)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:19:00 PM

    As lovely as the first

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Pace, back for a re-read of this gem...David

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:19:00 AM

    I would love to hear you perform this piece with musical instruments (just the flute) Nice design to compliments the words.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:06:00 PM

    How romantic and sweet. Awwwwww....lovely. Enjoy the blessing

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:43:00 PM

    What a lovely prayer...blessings...Donna

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:43:00 PM

    This is sooooo beautiful, you always write so passionately, it is sensational. I also love the shape, really nice visual effect! Well done. :)