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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:33:00 PM
    Double wow! Did you read this at the venue?

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:15:00 AM
    Very well done David ,,, and a very Merry Christmas to you :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:21:00 AM
    I picked this poem off the top 100. Brilliant and entertaining write which I enjoyed. Well done, David.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:08:00 AM
    David words fail me, this is so brilliant. ....Seren

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Wonderful expression of passion. Thanks............. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:06:00 PM
    hey, look at you. this one is high on the list of top 100 recent poems at Soup. Way to go, David.

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Wow David, just Wow! I am so impressed with this-- i totally loved how witty and clever this is! You sure got me hooked here-- I sort of wish I thought of writing something like this! A genius write and totally enjoyable-- I especially liked your last two stanzas, just so clever how you put this all together :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:13:00 PM
    This is brilliantly written. I relate to the lines 'A half-lit light casts a shadow on the flock wallpaper, ink stained. He sits hidden from view, away from plagiaristic eyes. Head In hand Scribbling while listening for a new word, a muse sings, emanating an un-heard Beat that guides his rhythm while searching for that elusive vowel. On the floor Is a scattering of pencil shavings and broken lead, frustration at the loss of an adjective. The half rhyme squeezes like a tourniquet SOOO TRUE!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:16:00 PM
    This is a long write but it says alot not bad.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Well well...David...I must use an expression here that cracks me up when my dad gets excited, HELLS-BELLS that was good!....wow...

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 11:37:00 PM
    I just came across this one David; Really a wonderful and entertaining write. Will come back a few times as so much to take in. Hugs, SuZ

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Brilliant, David! The Kwansaba family, standing 7 rows deep, gives you a 49-gun salute!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 7:47:00 PM
    The half rhyme stands clapping...While yelling "Bravissimo!"...."Bravissimo!"...As he sits back down,he pushes save/send to Fav file On his I-pad.On his face is a smile that he carries across the room,as he slowly exits the door. :o) Outstanding!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:07:00 AM
    WOW! How? How did you come up with this??? Absolutely amazing! :) Thanks for sharing and enlightening us. BTW...thanks for your post on my latest poem! :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Hi David and triple wow great one like it a lot, hope you are ok and having a great easter, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:18:00 PM
    awesome write, my friend - have a great Easter

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:41:00 AM
    hi my dear friend ..just stopping to wish you a very happy Easter.. and i enjoyed this piece so amazing <3 thank you for sharing your brilliant talent :) much luv and lights :) Sk

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 8:02:00 PM
    I'm so speechless 'cuz you amazed me so much on this super brilliant write my dear friend David! Kudos on your outstanding descriptive poem! Thanks for giving me another fav poem my dear friend! Have a blessed Easter Season! love and big hugs, Leonora

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    Thanks Leonora...
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 11:04:00 PM
    I have read this poem about 10 times, and still find it the most descriptive, inclusive array of poetic choices. I strive to learn amore about these various genre's of poetry. My absolute favourite line in this poem is... "the notes drift across the room, resting on the floor, congealing into a poet-tree fountain...".

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:21:00 PM
    this is poetry in motion David......brilliant ....

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