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SenSuality

Exchanged smiles and smirks
Between this girl and that guy
With constant tugs and jerks
Emotions they now run high

Supernovas and fire works!
When the sparks begin to fly!
No longer in the passenger seat
Now one is taking full command

The taste of her heavenly sweet
Aided by the touch of ones hand
And there hearts now they retreat
Now taken to a far out wonderland

And her body it now begins shaking
Exploring all those erogenous zones
These two spirits are now awakening
With the constant moans and groans

These two souls are now love making
Air filled with the smell of pheromones
And One another’s ears are now ringing
Having shared that moment of intensity

These to lovers who are left spine tingling
Having just had that feeling of intimacy
Kindred spirits there hearts now singing
With all those pleasures of sensuality




 

With this trying to put emphisis on the phisical feeling of love
between to people unlike the original verse Ive took off so many times this I felt less
explicid well hope so trying to use metaphores did not know where to go with this tryed
diffrent patterns sorry if seems offensive or rude what else can I say ,,,,,,,.............................,,PC GONE O,T,T?
WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT ORIGINALY JUNE JULY 2012 REWRITTEN MAR2013
INSPIERD ALSO BY OTHER MEMBERS ON THE SOUP WHO BLOW ME AWY WITH THERE
WRITES ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,x ds






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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Sensual indeed David.... you sure know your stuff :) enjoyed love Elizabeth xx

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 11:39:00 AM
    I thought it was very tastefully done David...everyone loves a love poem...Donna

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Very good read. Enjoyed this piece.