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Sound of you Writing

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Sound of you Writing

I hear you writing a sad poem
while your breaking this my old heart
all this wealth from your repertoire
while my pathetic minds feeds you.

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Hi Harry! That thought, "the sound of you writing" just gripped me-- so much that could be read into these lines-- making me think, I really like this... of how it makes me ponder and relate...I hope all is well with you!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:49:00 AM
    there is a sweet yearning in this piece that touches me deeply across the miles...and of course, that mind of yours may feel pathetic, but it is not....love, Victoria

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Great Grook dear poet! And if i read you right(write), my friend, your insight on the form of Grook intensified this write ! A fantastic decision on reading this poetry sir. Have a wonderful Spring....much love, james

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:13:00 PM
    This is a good kind of hurt, Harry. Love really does hurt, and it's worth it..when our love ones hurt, we hurt... As it should be.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Sad but good my friend .. like it xx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:30:00 AM
    sweetly sad..i love it :-)

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:07:00 AM
    How creative! You made it look so easy to write a Grook and poetic on top of that!! My blonde brain can't seem to grasp the pen!;) well done 'arry. Live ya Deb. winning wishes.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:58:00 PM
    ahhh, a sad grook. ME LIKES< Harry.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Harry...this is so beautiful! So expressive and beautiful. I'm sure if she knew...some of her sadness would disappear.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Your very deep today Harry, I drink of your fountain, lovely Grook, xxx

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:33:00 PM
    Very nice Grook poem here Harry.Liked it.Best wishes to you.